Poems between the empty set of time

In thine eyes, love, set a story
Of a sparkling flame, I intend to bury
In the shrining wind, thine hair, of night fragrant
An assault to my chest, causing up and down pant

The kisses of foams on the seas to the sands on the coast
For they brought with the streams of what strongest the most
The wishes of hearts, above the water, thy drift
On the quiet rivers after twilight, the stars lift.

Breath in hazing wet air, of after the rain
Along the arrival of red bowing rain, over the plantain
Comes the angel of the heart, with a gift of smile
Disappearing the thirst from a journey of a thousand mile.

On the wind, set land from the oceans
Of fear, hopes, and dreams, flew out of the silence
Slash the chest, breath the air of the open
To break all the bondages you and me, get rid of the burden



Adakah grammar ato kata2 yg salah? Silahkan kirimkan kritik dan saran... :)